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The Truth


Author: MC white
ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I asked myself how I felt. This was the answer I gave, ice cream snickers and all.


The Truth



And the truth is: I really don't know.
I really couldn't tell you how I feel about her.

Actually, I'm sorry, thats not entirely true. I could easily tell you each individual thought I have about her and me and everything that is in between us and surrounding us.

Unfortunately when you bring all those things together (as life tends to do) well I couldn't interpret my feelings on that mess for anything.

Not even an ice cream snickers bar.





Submitted on 2008-02-14 21:47:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i think it's cute :)
the mind does think in such abstract ways...

i shudder whenever i'm asked how i feel about something...



would anyone really want to take the time to sort it out?
| Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by andnow | [ Reply to This ]


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