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    dots Submission Name: The Truthdots
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    Author: MC white
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71/73/45
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I asked myself how I felt. This was the answer I gave, ice cream snickers and all.


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    dotsThe Truthdots
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    And the truth is: I really don't know.
    I really couldn't tell you how I feel about her.

    Actually, I'm sorry, thats not entirely true. I could easily tell you each individual thought I have about her and me and everything that is in between us and surrounding us.

    Unfortunately when you bring all those things together (as life tends to do) well I couldn't interpret my feelings on that mess for anything.

    Not even an ice cream snickers bar.





    Submitted on 2008-02-14 21:47:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think it's cute :)
    the mind does think in such abstract ways...

    i shudder whenever i'm asked how i feel about something...



    would anyone really want to take the time to sort it out?
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by andnow | [ Reply to This ]


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