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    dots Submission Name: Love Isdots

    Author: forfila
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 354/310/188
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 1010
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Thanks for the advice Ron

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    dotsLove Isdots

    What is love?
    Love is a gift stowed upon us to be enjoyed,
    to be used
    and to be shared

    Love is like a separate life
    The passion shared; the fuel,
    The dance of "us" the symptom of its worth

    A loves strength is the orders that create its reflections in you

    To reflect a partners love is to absorb and deflect,
    and is to share expression of a dwindling substance.

    To know loves origin is know both partner and self stand second to "Love" in its self, for love has a direction for life if it is whole.

    The higher worship is the giving of permission to let love steer within you,
    it is to understand love is the soul dance of the spirit.

    She is the most beautiful form of life in which to inspire love

    The key to loves simplicities is to know, I am simply a man, to know that life is not mine to shape, to know love is the power of light, and is the highest order.

    The ability to let ones self go, is the knowing the higher cause is your true concern,
    to know you wish to love her as love intends,
    to know its love wish for you to use your passions,
    To know the stars always shine, and god is always there, no matter what happens.

    2008 RavenMPCNZ

    Submitted on 2008-02-15 04:39:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good write. I love the passion you put into this piece. Looking forward to reading more.

    Danielle Allison<3
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by bloody_raven | [ Reply to This ]
      A suggestion for a title; "Love Is"
    | Posted on 2008-02-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonderful thoughts, it is tough to understand the nature of love... such many splendoured beauty it has!

    "Love is like a separate life"

    Yes, true... and elevates the mundane life to a higher level. Such expressions like: "Love is the soul dance of the spirit." and the conclusion are amazingly beautiful.

    The whole piece shines with the light of truth within.
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      I think mankind has spent many hours staring into the fire or into space contemplating the nature of ....... love! Your verse gives us a many faceted look at that most fickle and most intriguing institution! Excellent and intriguing write, Matt!!!
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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