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    dots Submission Name: too soondots
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    Author: Maverique
    ASL Info:    25/F/Own little world
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 438/478/128
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotstoo soondots
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    I'm no longer twenty three



    and still this world spins on its axis
    unconcernedly
    coldly
    impervious




    and soon I'll no longer be twenty five












    Submitted on 2008-02-15 08:07:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      How bout "Too Soon, But Never Too Late" for a title?
    | Posted on 2008-02-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      i hoped for more in this piece... just... more... to tell me why exactly, or imagery to accompany this.

    that quarter century is a hard pill to swallow. aging is a total b.itch, i know.
    ~
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]
      unlike the piece before this im a little confused. are you saying that the world isn't stopping for you just because your aging?
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      ...?

    --crimson
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]


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