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    dots Submission Name: [mis]understanddots
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    Author: Maverique
    ASL Info:    25/F/Own little world
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 438/478/128
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots[mis]understanddots
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    you [mis]understand me so well.



    it makes me wonder.
    how did we live
    with[out] each other
    all this while?










    Submitted on 2008-02-15 08:13:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      How very unique! I really liked your use of the brackets. They give it more depth... it's actually kind of funny!
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the bracketing, it gives the poem more possabilities. Its like two different poems. Great write, thank you for sharing. Jerilynn
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]
      well this is short and sweet. does the tittle refer to something else because it just doesnt seem to fit with this piece. but thats ok cause i do that all the time. you deff got the message out in those four lines. i like that you are blunt and get straight to the point.
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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