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    dots Submission Name: Lost Causedots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 61
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    Bytes: 670



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    dotsLost Causedots
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    Why does my lost cause
    Consume me so?
    This pointless chase
    This useless quest?
    His eyes unveil what’s more to me
    Than water’s depth
    And air

    But still I stare
    This hopeless stare
    I pose
    And try and fail
    And this worthless hunt
    My fruitless stalk
    Remains rooted and unveiled

    Remains cold and unacknowledged
    Like bridges long since fallen
    Like passions
    Long since stolen
    Adversity to bargain with
    For this I’ll fight the odds
    Because I love
    I need to save
    My beautiful lost cause






    Submitted on 2008-02-15 08:46:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      was your lost cause the boy you talked about in the first stanza? besides me being a little confused, i liked the wording of the poem cause you branched out and it didn't sound so mindless. goodwrite
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]



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