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    dots Submission Name: I'm Taking it Alldots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 77
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 826



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    dotsI'm Taking it Alldots
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    Figures off imagination
    Thriving off my head
    My body threatening to impose
    I'm here
    In pain-- but I'm not dead

    ...

    Long course strains my shoulders
    The officials strain my thoughts
    Tending wounds between the sets
    I'm here
    Completely—and I won't stop

    ...


    Grains of fear fall past this
    The grains of sand fall faster
    Just trying to douse the waiting flames
    I'm here
    They are—so I'll be faster

    ...

    Five strokes; no more breathing
    Three strokes left to haul
    You're there I'm here; we're suffering
    But I'm here right now

    And I'm taking it all





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