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Submission Name: lets go go go dots

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Author:	draconus
ASL Info:	16/male/uk
Elite Ratio:	1.73 - 45/91/55
Words:	113

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Misc
Total Views:	86
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	738

Description:
it's not finished yet

lets go go go dots

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running through the street
got the whole world turning
never out of fight
and i love the journey

yet
i see
myself
out there

can you here me now
can you see me running
you know what to do
so
lets go go go

come on
come on

we gotta see whats out there
while we still got it
you know i'll be there
at any time

yet
i see
your friends
out there

can you here me know
can you see me running
you know what to do
sooooooooooo
lets go go go

come on
lets go

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