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    dots Submission Name: lets go go godots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 738



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    dotslets go go godots
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    running through the street
    got the whole world turning
    never out of fight
    and i love the journey

    yet
    i see
    myself
    out there

    can you here me now
    can you see me running
    you know what to do
    so
    lets go go go

    come on
    come on

    we gotta see whats out there
    while we still got it
    you know i'll be there
    at any time

    yet
    i see
    your friends
    out there

    can you here me know
    can you see me running
    you know what to do
    sooooooooooo
    lets go go go

    come on
    lets go






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