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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Watashi wa Yuudia-kun de ski
    Ski ski ski
    Eie ai
    Ai
    Skidou watashi skidou
    Aama ye tamei mata mata
    Saka yuki
    Yuki yo no ni
    Tada shizuka ni
    Konna omoi nara
    Shirazu ni irebe yokata yo
    Demo eyee ni smi fortesyo
    Ta tamei




    Submitted on 2008-02-15 21:39:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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