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    dots Submission Name: My Demon Loverdots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsMy Demon Loverdots
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    My sweet demon lover
    So kind yet
    So dark
    Your embrace
    You touch
    Your kiss
    I claim I am neutral
    But you make me want to choose sides
    The side of good
    Or bad
    Which one
    I do not know
    My sweet demon lover
    Why do you torment me so?
    My insides are racking
    At this choice
    To stay you
    Or my friends
    I cannot deside
    And I'm sure I never will
    For I love friends
    But I'm in love with you
    My Demon Love




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      Disa, I'm so sorry that I wasnt able to call you, and I know that you are probably mad at me, and I understand...*looks down* I'm sorry...that your sad...please be happy again....
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by Aion Kiori | [ Reply to This ]


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