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    dots Submission Name: Time's Updots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 95
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1229



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    dotsTime's Updots
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    I woke up again today,
    Disturbed, disgusted, alone,
    And I sat on my bed thinking,
    Where has my life gone?

    I stare at the reflection in the mirror
    That pale face I see,
    Does that person really exist?
    If it does, is it me?

    I need to be left alone,
    Isolation is the only way,
    History repeats itself, I'm afraid
    And tomorrow becomes today.

    I want to go back to sleep
    Not go to school today,
    Because you are there, and I ache,
    I will not be okay.

    But I can't keep running,
    The time is catching up with me,
    Tell me it's gonna stop now,
    That there is more for me to live.

    And just tell me a few things,
    That your brain doesn't work like mine,
    That you're not thinking about this,
    Because I am not fine.

    I spill my heart and soul to you,
    But you never confide in me
    I am living your pain,
    And see all you don't want to see.

    The repetition annoys me,
    Makes me scream and shout,
    I am done writing this crap,
    Goodbye, I'm going out.




    Submitted on 2008-02-17 03:29:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the end is funny! You sound fustrated! Your rhythm was nice. Only a souple of places it seemed off. Good write keep it up!
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]



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