Shine Bright

Author: ashik Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50 /37 /31 Words: 48

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Shine Bright

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There has been a star, Raised high into the heavens, Guiding and protecting, We follow and adore. Many times ore vision becomes clouded, We fear it's gone But this star, Holy and caring, reaches down to touch our hearts. Raises our heads and, allows us to see.

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