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    dots Submission Name: the sculptor.dots

    Author: narcolepsy
    ASL Info:    19/F/Pa
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 129/135/60
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsthe sculptor.dots

    things are looking up
    even in the past
    glimpses of this crossed my lids
    in dreams, perhaps, but they were there
    flitting somewhere in the distance

    although it rains, i see sunshine
    i am self-fulfilled, and i am worthy
    there is nothing to hold me back now

    i never left that place
    like the sculptor would with a block of clay
    i chipped away the parts that weren't me

    and i am so much the same
    yet everyone thinks i am someone different
    they just never knew.

    Submitted on 2008-02-17 13:39:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      although it rains, i see sunshine
    i am self-fulfilled, and i am worthy
    there is nothing to hold me back now

    I loved these lines! Perhaps we're all sculptors of our own destiny and should do our best to chip off all the baggage that keeps us from leading fulfilling lives.

    Yes, I did enjoy your poem and do encourage you to keep penning your thoughts.

    :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-02-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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