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    dots Submission Name: The Neverendingdots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 365/561/240
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 79
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 670



    Description:
       It goes on and on and on. For one second, you think you've found relief—but it comes at you again, attacking you from some blind spot...


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    dotsThe Neverendingdots
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    It’s not enough to be alone—
    you’ve got to rub it in like salt
    and it’s got to be hard enough
    to break your lonely bones.
    Writhe with life, you fetus of
    this world’s womb,
    and carve away at the night
    with your swollen, watery eyes—
    it’ll get you through the night, at least.
    But what happens when the sickness
    swallows you whole? And what happens
    when you swallow the sickness whole,
    with all its perks and disadvantages,
    haunting your every move?
    You ask for help, you don’t receive it,
    and you go on living

    your life.





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      Beautiful.
    I like this line:
    Writhe with life, you fetus of
    this world’s womb
    | Posted on 2008-02-18 00:00:00 | by wovenwords | [ Reply to This ]



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