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    dots Submission Name: I Want Small Feetdots
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    Author: LucyDiamond
    ASL Info:    17/F/Sky
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 365/561/240
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 84
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    dotsI Want Small Feetdots
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    We eat Dim Sum
    in good little China Town.
    Little people
    with tiny feet live in China Town,
    feet even smaller than mine!
    And I have small feet,
    by American standard.
    Also by American standard,
    I have good living. I eat how much I want
    and I diet how much I want—
    there is no luxury
    I will convince myself out of if I really, really want it.
    And there is nothing I will be deprived of

    —if I really, really want it.





    Submitted on 2008-02-17 15:58:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I found your piece enjoyable, but I found StellarTotem's comment hilarious. For the benefit of your self-esteem, however, I shall publically admit that I did not think the first few lines were about eating people. So back to what I did think:

    It's a kind of miscellaneous piece, I'm not sure it would be catagorised poetry. You relate the day's events with your small feet, then those to your adequate living. I guess it's a distorted way of being grateful for what you've got. And I actually quite liked the title.

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2008-02-18 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 | [ Reply to This ]



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