I only fished once in my life. I can't really say that it's for me but I can see why old people like it a lot. There is a very assured feeling of time passing slowly. It puts you in a hand frozen trance that lets you drift away to a place where you can find yourself. It's a good way to rewind life and find solace with Morpheus or some other god who likes to trip.
But anyway, I like this piece. It has a distinct maturity and takes a great sense of pleasure from hypnotizing others. It also comforts you and assures you that time will go on but you'll be alright.
It's refreshing for something that flows and not pours.
This made me think of me falling asleep while fishing when I was young. I love the tranquillity this portrays, but I am unclear about the meaning, I am not sure I know what you are trying to say. Is this just a dream or are you using the water and fish as a metaphor for something else, emotion maybe.
Nonetheless I liked it and it certainly spiked some emotion.