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    dots Submission Name: tangled in the wooddots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotstangled in the wooddots
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    upon my forehead
    i display the mark of summer.
    i keep the oceans in my eyes
    & with my tongue,
    i honey the soil of earth.

    you can find me smiling
    in the sweet branches of the future.
    i stretch out long into mornings,
    tuck beneath the mossed rocks
    & sleep in the pools of light
    that play across your face.

    i am soft skin
    unfolding in the blue.
    i need nothing
    but to be tangled in the wood.




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      wow. i really appreciate your voice and your poetry, this poem just contributed greatly towards my already great longing for summer
    | Posted on 2008-02-20 00:00:00 | by stasisindarknes | [ Reply to This ]


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