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    dots Submission Name: in the face of god's abodedots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsin the face of god's abodedots
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    starless night
    may winter break a spell on you,
    & whisper not
    the true name
    of your heart.

    & i mean these words apotropaically
    in the hopes
    that evil will not work its way
    into the minds of the many.

    my dreams are cthonic
    & filled with such lofty philosophies.
    i'm waiting for the bright path
    towards the river
    of waking life inside myself.

    is all that i know
    the movement of the all-mother always
    or is there more,
    still locked away
    for me to find?

    i search from the sky,
    above myself,
    looking for some echolalia of love below.
    & it is better to look down for such nourishment
    as the world is harsh with terror
    & the way of the child
    is fierce & unknowing
    in the face of god's abode.

    i am swimming
    against the birds of forever
    for some merciful,
    unrelenting hand of good.
    & i'm only coming up
    with feathers.




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      hey thanks.. i never realized there was a typo in this one. fixed!
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]
      Heh. See this is what I was talking about in an other comment. That feeling that there must be more to life than what you see. I can tell you though that it's that place not you. Try to get out of that island, travel a lot if you can. Life is so different everywhere. Southern France is a special place. Many great artists found inspiration there. I just saw the sun there while passing through and I understood...
    | Posted on 2008-06-13 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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