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    Author: informations
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    think about these feelings
    feel these things
    experience this anger
    take this dagger
    just stab her soul
    all of her, whole

    feel this rage
    locked in the cage
    you do not dare test
    the captain of this terrible mess
    drift off in thought
    like you haven't lost a lot

    imagine there is no pain
    pretend you are not insane
    when you feel this
    really feel this
    let it rinse you clean
    from the ugly one you have been

    think of her heart
    go back to the start
    was she pure
    was she yours
    who was she then
    and who is she now?




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