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    dots Submission Name: Lessdots
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    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I thought myself back to a day when I was not this way
    The thoughts came full force and they hurt
    But the lack of those thoughts remain in my brain
    Never the same, never quite sane

    Never are they there long enough
    What is it that I am hiding?
    What is it that I am actually finding?
    Not a thing, nothing plausible.

    I remember some old times, but I never really look back on them
    I remember some good times but I never really know what to do with them
    I see some old faces and some old games I played
    But I never really dare ask questions

    Isn't that a shame?




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