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    dots Submission Name: She Begins To Pull The Trigger.dots
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    Author: Demon__666
    ASL Info:    18/f/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 274/316/90
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsShe Begins To Pull The Trigger.dots
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    I knew i loved you the moment we met.
    I just didnt know how to say it.
    But now its way to late.
    You have moved to someone "better".
    The hole in my heart gets bigger.
    As i watch you waste your life with her.
    She begins to pull the trigger.
    I watch the gun fall.
    Your life spirals downward.
    Heart shatters to the floor.
    Gun clatters, fires, smokes.
    You stare in disbelif.
    Hold your gaping hole.
    Contact my eyes.
    Nothing lies behind.
    Beg for me back.
    I look away.
    I cant love you now.
    You have gone astray.




    Submitted on 2008-02-18 17:22:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Interesting write, this other women made you feel like she is killing "your love", she is pulling the trigger (the cause) But if she is the one holding the gun, why does the gun fall ? is it because she is ashamed what she did ? By taking him away from you, infecting him ?

    I love the ending, it sounds like your way of making peace, its your way of letting go and to move on with your life.
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]


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