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    dots Submission Name: I love you dots
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    Author: anguished_child
    ASL Info:    16/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 69/51/57
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Story/
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 742



    Description:
       a note to my baby
    the one that i love


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    dotsI love you dots
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    Baby I love you
    Do you know are the most precious thing to me and I love you with my entire heart and soul
    You’re the only thing that I want in this life
    Nothing else matters to me but you baby
    I miss talking to you for hours on end
    I miss spending time with you
    I miss hold your hand in mine has we walk down the street
    I love you baby
    I love you so much and your so perfect in every way, shape and form
    I love you baby and you know that I will do anything for you
    All I want to do baby is to be next to you to be with you everyday that I live
    I want to be by your side forever and ever

    I love you baby
    Always &forever




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    ||| Comments |||
      This brings tears to my eyes. It's just so loving and sweet. I just love how you pour your devotion so entirely out in this poem..
    | Posted on 2008-04-19 00:00:00 | by arodase | [ Reply to This ]
      I miss it all too, and perhaps when the smoke clears...it'll all be good again maybe we will have what we need to survive.
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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