Desaturated sky
Expands above my head
One lover at a distance
And one under my hand
I reach to touch his shoulder
But I find hers instead
Will it all come together
To make sense at the end
I have to flee the city
But I'll be back for more
Still I don't know the meaning
Of what I'm looking for
Why should I have to hide her
Behind my secret door
Soon I will have to speak
These words I now ignore
i really liked this, i dont think that i have ever read i poem like this one before. i liked the flow and i feel that you could add on to it if you wanted to but i liked it just the way it is.
Submission Name: Desaturated Sky
