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    dots Submission Name: ''a brush w/ death''dots
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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    31/M/NewYork
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 66/69/29
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 84
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    dots''a brush w/ death''dots
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    my angels are demons
    you could'nt understand,
    awash w/ death
    in the palm of my hand...

    angel wings upon my back
    devil wings upon my shoulder,
    angels whispers in my ear
    devil whispers and i am colder.

    i draw some blood,
    and take a breath,
    i push the plunger,
    a brush w/ death.

    angels they bleed,
    devils they feed,
    visions in my mind,
    entangling me.

    substaces controlled,
    throughout my bloodstream unfold...

    save me a taste,
    of the tounge twisting
    face.

    so i can pen me a verse,
    most shockingly unrehearsed...




    Submitted on 2008-02-19 00:39:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I personally believe that we should get in touch with our dark and light sides in order to be good writers. It is the balance of which that can allow us to see and paint the world truthfully. It also gives us the ability to feel but not get overwhelmed by the emotion. It's a very useful instrument of creation; just like life and death.

    The presence of life teaches us while the notion of death helps us apppreciate those teachings.

    What I like about this one is the level of activity. It is as if you are gasping for air screaming I want to matter. And that flavor just allows you to seep through our consciousness as readers.
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]



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