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    dots Submission Name: If Trees Could Talkdots
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    Author: Megsrus aka Meg
    ASL Info:    15/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 9/63/39
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 246
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    dotsIf Trees Could Talkdots
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    If trees could talk and flowers could sing
    Wouldn't that be a wonderful thing
    If dogs could dance and cats could cook
    Would you stop and take a look
    If fish were on land and goats in the sea
    Would you take them seriously
    If down was up and up was down
    Wouldn't you think me a marvelous clown




    Submitted on 2008-02-19 16:11:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, this is funny, funny stuff here, indeed!! did you know that English is the only language where you chop a tree down, and then you chop it up??? bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww... cute and silly and somewhat a sign for future.. good
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool... it's cute and funny and really dream-like. I like it! If I would do anything differently, I would definently make it longer! I love it. I hardly find this type anymore. And if trees could talk it certainly would be a grand thing!
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      this is awsome. the rhyming is great and its funny :)
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice and surrealistic. Made my nonsense quota for the day, and it was written well.

    *two thumbs up!*
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by Quin | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is whimsical, and just plain .... funny! Thanks for the novelty and thanks for a great chuckle!
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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