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    dots Submission Name: Intro to A world of strangedots

    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Story/Satire
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       The first chapter in probably a 14 chapter piece I like to call "A World of Strange"

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    dotsIntro to A world of strangedots

    Some people fish or drink alcohol for fun, I kill people. Now, I know what you are thinking. "What? Who kills for fun!?" And don't get me wrong it's fun, LOADS of fun, but I don't just kill anyone and everyone. Maybe I should start from the begining.

    Unlike any other human being I am fifty percent metal. My organs are human but my brain and body are not. I am what you could call a "cyborg" but I don't like to put things into terms of black and white. When I was fully human I was a bad man, a ruthless killer if you will. He only knew one thing: kill. He was very good at it too. But thankfully he was in a very bad explosion and they had to save him by turning him into a machine. Needless to say his killing skills were honed but controlled. Don't worry I am one of the good guys now. But unfortunately that doesn't stop everyone from fearing me.

    Submitted on 2008-02-19 20:05:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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