Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Pretensesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Quin
    Elite Ratio:    3.68 - 37/36/18
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 258
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1270



    Description:
       ...Just a few thoughts.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPretensesdots
    -------------------------------------------


    + Sinking slowly,
    we take on the world.
    With foolish dreams, and hopeless hopes,
    we fight on.
    Such precious cargo
    we bear on our shoulders;
    dying slowly,
    we take on the world.

    Let it be said that chivalry isn’t dead,
    you helped me when I help you.
    But we can’t contain it,
    those hot spots of freedom,
    and plus, why would we
    when we can roam?

    It’s not so bad when we sit together,
    but everyone watches us anyway.
    We tell them its nothing,
    and blush aside, mouthing
    the words we wish we could say aloud.
    It’s terrible the way we hide from each other.

    +

    Such is the way we are.
    We can’t help but fight.
    It’s all about the here and now,
    so don’t bother crying.
    In the day we bicker endlessly,
    at night we smile tenderly,
    and tell one another
    those words, so illusive.

    It’s called hate,
    Or love,
    Depends on who’s asking
    Like water and fire,
    We create a mist
    which confuses us:
    and we lose our way
    in the fog we create.
    But under the cover of being lost, we hold hands.




    Submitted on 2008-02-19 21:06:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      When I first started reading this, I thought you were just talking about humans in general, about how we're foolish and all. Of course, I was wrong, but I enjoyed the end resulf of the poem. I especially like the third stanza.
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 00:00:00 | by Sparkster | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.