who am I -------------------------------------------
Who am I but an empty shell
I look in the mirror but can not tell.
Walking under the blacken sky.
Watching life just pass me by.
I Never question or wonder why.
I wish for death but never die.
I yell until my lungs content.
Standng there unconfident.
who am I but an empty shell.
I look in the mirror but can not tell.
I found this write to be extremely sad
I too My Friend have fought most of my life with depression and I know exactly how painful it is
I have a Love affair with Mirror Poetry and you My Friend quite easily captured the art of a mirror poem with this write
If you ever need someone to talk to dont be afraid to PM me I Promise I will answer back
Great Work!!!
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron
I think we all ask ourselves this question several times in our lives. Finding yourself and who you are is a tough journey. Hopefully you like the person you become. Good write.
</3 lisa
(by the way, in the ninth line you left out the word "I". just so you know.)
Submission Name: who am I
