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    dots Submission Name: Who Killed Hip-Hop?dots
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    Author: 7makaveli
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 36/42/45
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWho Killed Hip-Hop?dots
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    It shouldn't take a reflection that explores the depths of your wisdom,
    Corporate America has simply found its newest victim,
    Rooted in the art of contractual negotiations,
    Artists have forgotten their moral obligations,
    The deterioration is visible through lyrical evaluation,
    Justifying why you're "hot" does not take imagination,
    Gone are the days of storytellers and sophistication,
    Simply make up a dance and become an overnight sensation,
    I agree that the craft did not come with a set of instructions,
    Opened the door for a scrawny li'l "Soulja" of destruction,
    Although, no singly entity is responsible for this tragedy,
    As you can see, it is the undesired product of apathy,
    A wise one said the "gangsta rhymers ain't inspired",
    The young are too ignorant to learn from those who've retired,
    Hip-Hop is not Crunk, nor Snap, nor Pop,
    It is a lyrical explosion that fills the empty pots,
    However, this identity crisis has rendered it lifeless,
    When one stares into the dark they will likely think they're sightless,
    Believe me, hope comes before our ignorance and other vices,
    Prove me otherwise and I shall claim you to be the wisest,
    But as long as you and I are out there rhymin' well, Hip-hop may be somewhere alive and well,




    Submitted on 2008-02-20 16:56:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the theme of this poem, I really do, but I don't personally like the way it was put together. Your word fluctuation was good, but I feel that the format was a little to restrictive to the piece. You say a lot of true and powerful things about hip hop here, and I really like the piece overall.
    | Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by Raistlin Sith | [ Reply to This ]
      Decent not the best pieces of rhymes of seen but it's decent. it's truth i hate souljsboy, his songs demean wemon and just are dumb as it is. Truth is something you can never criticize cause with your rhymes and all, i'm right there with you mentally. I've been saying this for years.
    | Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]



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