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Remembering You

Author: kession
ASL Info:    18~M~ok
Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115 /156 /63
Words: 203
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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to someone who still holds a piece of me to this day

Remembering You

sitting here today,
thoughts of you fill my head,
wondering what i could say,
to be able to have you to hold once again.

remembering the times we had,
the moments we shared,
remembering that first kiss,
and how i was so scared.

maybe i could've done things differently,
maybe i didn't do enough,
to this day i'm wondering,
how i lost your love.

at first things were so good,
i felt things i thought i would never feel,
it was my heart that you took,
the way i felt was surreal.

i remember the very first "i love you",
and when we said goodbye,
when you told me i was the only one,
and when you said i wasn't the right guy.

i keep your pictures,
to this very day,
hoping you will come back,
and tell me it's all okay.

i will always love you,
and that will never change,
a big piece of my heart will always be yours,
and no one can ever take that away.

i don't have forever,
so come back soon,
so i can once again feel your touch,
so i can once again hold you.

i'm waiting......

Submitted on 2008-02-20 17:27:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  im sorry is it ok that this mad me cry. wow i mean it was heartflet and well writen. i love the way i could feel/see the sadness and the love in this. you seem like a very amazing writer. this reminded me of someone i am in love with and have been in love with for about 4 years. to day he loves so many other girls. i mean my story may not be ur poem word for word but it was very close. wow amazing job keep up the good work and i look forward to reading others writen by u. comment som of mine (spelling may be off on mine but thats cuz i write way to fast) lol.
_tayla_ aka sickofhurting U
| Posted on 2008-02-23 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]

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