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    dots Submission Name: the sound of silencedots
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    Author: reveries
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 54/74/23
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       when I'm going through writer's block I like to just sit and see what comes out...this came out


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    dotsthe sound of silencedots
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    I sit and wait...
    waiting for music to flow
    from my fingertips-but
    all I get is static-
    staring,
    bewildered by the
    page's silence.




    Submitted on 2008-02-20 18:25:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! Nice write! I listen, but all I get is the sound of silence!

    Of all things, I have an old post at my site (way towards the bottom of the list) with this exact same title.
    | Posted on 2008-02-23 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Ooh, this was pretty good. I especially enjoyed the personification of the "static - staring", I just kind of got this impression that the static is kind of intimidating you, thus feeding into your writer's block. "Bewildering" I think was the perfect word to use at that point. :] However, it doesn't seem you have that bad of writer's block - look what you did! :]

    Take care!
    -Sierra
    | Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]


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