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    dots Submission Name: Prayer Part Idots
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    Author: Tisa
    ASL Info:    17~Female~YourImagination
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 3/7/11
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1000



    Description:
       I know it's boring. But it's only part one. Please be patient. ^3^

    And I wish to encourage you to read Part II and III!

    No peer pressure inteded of course! But, you know, encouraging. ^3^


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    dotsPrayer Part Idots
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    Dear God,


    First, I want to thank You for the beautiful day You brought to me and the wonderful food on the table. Please watch over my friends, for I want them to be filled with as much joy as I feel every single day whenever I think about them. I also wish for You to bless my family for taking care of me and raising me so well.


    Especially my grammy. She's very sick today. My mommy told me it was influenza, and I know it shouldn't be considered too serious to worry so much about. But she's very old and I'm not sure if she's very strong. Please help her get well, Father.


    I love You very much and please forgive me of my sins that I may have commited today. I'm still a very foolish girl, still learning to follow in Your footsteps and yearning for You everyday.


    I pray all of this in Your Son's precious name,


    Amen.




    Submitted on 2008-02-20 19:46:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      un-boring. peaceful, quiet, sincere, simple, raw and pure would be the words i would choose to describe this. no matter what one believes or doesn't who can deny that this is all of those?
    i must admit however that it is a bit strange reading, only because (for me at least) it kinda feels as if i am standing there watching someone (a child) on their knees, bedside saying goodnight prayers. very personal space unless maybe you are the parent figure...
    suppose it could be that was what you were aiming for though.
    look forward to part deuce.
    | Posted on 2008-02-20 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]



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