The coffee Stains
i should of Cleaned it
it really doesn't Exist
i should of Said sorry for it
i should of Wiped up
| It seems this piece speaks of a lot more than coffee stains. I suppose all stains lead to the same string of thoughts and regrets. I'm not exactly sure whether you meant the piece to be in slang. Because if not, all your "of"s should be "have"s. It surprises me that you capitalise seemingly random words, yet refrain from capitalising your "I"s. I suggest you do so. |
The piece is a fight of emotions, and I'm sure everyone wishes that all stains were coffee.
|| Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 | [ Reply to This ] |