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    dots Submission Name: Tools of Wardots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    16/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 30/52/66
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 105
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    dotsTools of Wardots
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    Bombs, Planes
    Tanks, Guns
    Blood filled tears
    Cries of the mother

    Presidents, Kings
    Senators, Tyrants
    Demons behind the veil
    Of freedom and liberty

    Sex, Drugs
    Lies, Media
    Into the fresh mind
    A future corrupted

    Change, Reform
    Forward, Children
    The future is not bleak
    But the spark is still needed

    Love, Peace
    Unity, Faith
    The destruction of ignorance
    The planting of love

    Brothers, Sisters
    Mothers, Fathers
    Its amazing really
    What can counter the tools of War




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