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    dots Submission Name: Safety at Homedots
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    Author: ashik
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50/37/31
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    Description:
       this was written for a highschool creative writing class so please be gentile


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    dotsSafety at Homedots
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    God is an island,
    That is my home.
    His shore isn’t hard to find.
    All you need do is ask,
    And you will see…

    White pure perfect shores,
    Radiant green grasses,
    Water falls, and lakes
    All for you to enjoy.
    Surrounded with love,
    From my God above.

    This is my God.
    Perfect as white sandy shores.
    Comforting as the soft green hills
    And peaceful as shade from a canopy.

    I come to His island
    When I’m overjoyed.
    I come to God’s island
    When my pain I can’t shake.
    In search of hope,
    I come.

    This is my God,
    Perfect as those white sandy shores
    Arms open wide,
    Ready to guide.




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