Killer by shadow of death

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Submission Name: Killer dots

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Author:	shadow of death
ASL Info:	18/M/baltimore
Elite Ratio:	3.55 - 37/50/33
Words:	89

Class/Type:	Poetry/Death
Total Views:	93
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	477

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Killer

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I stand there knife in hand, with the stench of death in the air.

I stand there with my victim laid faced down blooded on the floor.

I do not shake, I did not hesitate, I just stand there with knife in hand.

I walk away with out a trace of blood on me, I leave without a guilty thought in my head.

The world justs run pass me unaware that I have just comited murder.

I stand there with knife .

Submitted on 2008-02-21 10:07:03 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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3: meh!
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||| Comments |||
  Whoa. Kinda erie there, as if a sociopathic killer goes on to persue his killings and unexplicably feels no remorse, walks away like nothing ever happened. It scares you, but at the same time explains the analogies of the brain and how people like that who roam our earth must seek psychological counseling and take prescription drugs so that stuff like that gets avoided. *gets the chills*
| Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
  i dont know what the other person was talking abnout but im creepy. anyway. its gonna be okay yo. not to be too nosy or anything but why yo??? dreams huh??? another piece of writng made up in your mind perhaps??? i dont know. why????? who could deserve it. but then i could see so many reasons to kill. without guilt. they p[robably deserved it but who are you to judge that???? but im no judge. just why????

tina
| Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  this is creepy. that's all i've got.
</3 lisa
| Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]

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