honetly. i dont belive you when you say your a demon. no offense but you'll know a demon when when you meet one. but maybe not yo. i mean, if you want to work for satan go ahead yo. but maybe one day youll meet a angel yo. a fight between two realms using earth as a battle field. your a pawn yo. hahaha. nice write though.
Don't ask why, but I really like this. I guess it's because I can related to a lot of it. The part where you feel like this is a pivotal point in your life, that came off as very clear, raw, and brilliant... It was like a knife cutting down through the smog and you could see everything clearly, with sparkling clarity... that's how it came off to me. I like it. Nice job!!!