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i am creepy


Author: ladiesplanet1
ASL Info:    23.cali baby
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Class/Type: Poetry /Me
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i get stuck in arguement with myself about my name and then i kinda of realize maybe im just talking to myself again. hi, im Creepy.


i am creepy



I am The Creepy Critter
Or was it Creepy, the critter
Sometimes, Creepy & Critter
Fight each other
For control
They try to make themselves a whole
A living soul
One year Santa gave them coal
At first they just got told
They where to bold
But it was cold
And in the end they got together
To beat the seasons snowy weather.
To make The Creepy Critter
I gave myself the jitters
To become Creepy, the critter.
But sometimes in the winter
I get jitters
From the cold
Then i remember coal
And sometimes Creepy & Critter
Get too bitter
For the winter
And try to kill each other
For the coal
But remeber a lonely winter getting told
That saving oneself is sold
So maybe they should just hold hands
Instead of making obsurd demands
Just to save the winter from the cold
Cuz then Santa would just get told
That one day coal
Could turn to goals
Of making gold
Thats really diamonds
In an really shiny mold
That grows on rotten orange peels
Mixed with toothpaste
To make some trippy shit come true.
Like when they kill themself
Before the winters over
But how cold is the winter
When they just hold each other
When Creepy, the critter
Becomes The Creepy Critter
But am I The Creepy Critter
Or am I Creepy, the critter?
Perhaps just plain ol' CREEPY yo




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  inner conflict is my favorite.
especially when both sides are amusing.

:]

<3

take care.
| Posted on 2008-02-28 00:00:00 | by shawnaSUNSHINE | [ Reply to This ]
  i [censored] love this.
hah, it was just so twisted and amusing.
<3
| Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
  this was funny in most parts and lots of rhymes too i enjoyed the read

sandman
| Posted on 2008-02-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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