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    dots Submission Name: The Dead Seed Withindots

    Author: SavedDragon
    Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 302/257/80
    Words: 247
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Dead Seed Withindots

    Blundered burden here I am,
    I face the truth with a mask at hand
    Beaming ray strikes a hole
    The rain I feel piercing my soul,
    Sitting corpse on the edge,
    Of a sinking boat and drowning hedge

    Leafless trees and darkened sky,
    Brings me to a hopeless cry,
    An empty mind a lasting drought
    This life has failed there is no doubt
    A reaching hand I've hoped for less,
    The wind just blows to nothingness

    A ragged gown and bleeding wound,
    Pained the sun and praised the moon,
    Swinging legs to and fro
    In this lonely place I now call home,
    This seed within now has grown,
    The reason for this is unknown

    Blinded eyes scarred my heart,
    And ended the game back to the start,
    Poison killed the living thing
    And has emptied out my only being,
    A future now I still can see,
    The angel shows the light to me

    Drowned now in a puddle of tears,
    I swim into sorrow and shallow fears
    The clock runs out, there is no time
    All that's left are it's hands and mine
    Will my time come, where is life?
    I search through a hole and hollow pipe

    Finally I see, what I have done
    I made this mess and what I have become
    To face myself in sanity
    And wash myself of this uncertainty
    I'll awaken to finally be me,
    And erase the mistake of this old dream.

    Submitted on 2008-02-21 17:16:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks, the last sestet was inspired by the Linkin Park song "What I've Done".
    | Posted on 2009-08-15 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]
      this was beautiful. i loved your choice of words and how it all flowd beautifuly. very goodwrite. I hope you are ok because this is a very sad piece too. if you ever need to talk im here.
    | Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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