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Submission Name:
Your Mistake
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Author:
SonOfDamascus
ASL Info:
17/m/Maine
Elite Ratio:
2.6 - 18/17/24
Words:
137
Class/Type:
Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:
104
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895
Description:
In The Style Of Burned, Crank And Glass.
The Real Message Is Down The Left Side.
And The Very Last Line.
You Can Probably Guess What This Is About.
Tell Me If You Like It.
I Have Had A Bit Of Inspiration Out Of This.
Your Mistake
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I Don’t Know What To Say About It.
Feel The Cold Deed Slap Me In The Face.
Like A Burning Cold
You Might Know How It Is, But I Doubt It.
Betrayed By Your Thoughts And Actions
Me Feeling Like This Is New.
~:~
It’s Hard To Believe
Too Hard To Deal With.
Much Of It My Fault Too.
To Know All Of It.
Think Next Time Please?
About Your Decisions.
~:~
I Feel The Direct Pain
Know That I Do.
You’re Being Given A Second Chance.
Sorry It Had To Be Like This.
~:~
It’s A Long Way From Love
Your Choices Show Your Intelligence
Problem Numero Uno.
Now Fix It.
Submitted on 2008-02-21 22:24:46
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