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    dots Submission Name: Feast of Lovedots
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    Author: poetry chica
    ASL Info:    17/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93/98/34
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFeast of Lovedots
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    As the blue-bloods roam the streets,
    Searching for their soul mates
    The one person who can fill them
    Those who are willing to give their souls

    The torn and sun-shot drapes
    The shrouds of veil surrounding
    Cries of self-fulfillment
    Burning in the fire of love.

    As blue bloods eat and drink
    The blood of their loves outpoured
    They whisper sweet dreams
    Into their victims handsome mouths

    Their souls intertwine
    Love bites tattooed upon their veins
    As the sun kisses the twilight
    They huddle together within their blue-blood hole.

    As the world to which they are bound begins to fade,
    As the portal opens wide,
    They dance like animals beneath the sunrise,
    Waiting for their salvation.

    The sun pierces their paper thin bodies
    Sun shot holes appearing on their skin
    As their bodies turn to ash
    Their souls fly together into the horizon.




    Submitted on 2008-02-22 10:57:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that was really pretty effing good! On the first read, I thought "oh my god this is horrible" but I read it again & really let the visuals sink in & it totally changed my mind. I just kinda don't understand the 'blue blood' thing...anyway, keep up the good work!

    | Posted on 2008-02-23 00:00:00 | by Mark Huntsman | [ Reply to This ]


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