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To the rhytm of your heart

Author: caspian
ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark
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Words: 113
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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To the rhytm of your heart

I see you in the midnight clouds
across the silvery moon
in a swift and distant light, barely visible to human eyes, or maybe just to the kind that lies and waits for better days to make it right.
Your breath is in my ears, your hands are on my waist
its half past ten and im still wide awake.
Maybe morning never comes. Maybe love is wrong.

I see you in the trees. In the crooked branches on the way. To the rhythm of your heart, leaves are falling, decomposing, and once more venturing from the dark.

Submitted on 2008-02-22 16:39:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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