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Author: Jakirina
ASL Info:    19/F/WI
Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 216 /200 /80
Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /Satire
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The assignment was to write a seven line poem. This is what came out. And the word 'gleaming' should be on the 4th line, but it didn't really fit on here...sorry.


Quiet and I’ll tell you a secret: There’s a hole between my legs,
dark and painful. I went down to the edge of the river,
a pebble in my mouth, I lay upon cold stones willing my flesh
to blend into the heavy shifting green. I cursed the moon for gleaming
off my paleness so vividly. This is where my heart exploded.
Carefully I collected and wrapped the pieces in Ivy leaves,
then gave it to my father.

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