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    dots Submission Name: Shh.dots
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    Author: Jakirina
    ASL Info:    19/F/WI
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 216/200/80
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 460



    Description:
       The assignment was to write a seven line poem. This is what came out. And the word 'gleaming' should be on the 4th line, but it didn't really fit on here...sorry.


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    dotsShh.dots
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    Quiet and I’ll tell you a secret: There’s a hole between my legs,
    dark and painful. I went down to the edge of the river,
    a pebble in my mouth, I lay upon cold stones willing my flesh
    to blend into the heavy shifting green. I cursed the moon for gleaming
    off my paleness so vividly. This is where my heart exploded.
    Carefully I collected and wrapped the pieces in Ivy leaves,
    then gave it to my father.




    Submitted on 2008-02-23 14:19:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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