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    dots Submission Name: Right Nowdots
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    Author: Persephone
    ASL Info:    19/f/ US
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 328/352/136
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
    Total Views: 593
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    Bytes: 662



    Description:
       A vent because I hate how I'm being treated right now.


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    dotsRight Nowdots
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    I think right now
    you should know,
    I really hate you.

    I hate how you use me,
    how I'm only called upon
    if you need me for something.

    You say we're friends,
    but you don't treat me,
    like any type of friend I know of.

    It's horrible,
    but in the end,
    I'm nothing.

    To you, to both of you,
    I am expendable,
    let-go-able.

    So don't tell me,
    get over it,
    we're friends.

    Friends don't hurt friends,
    at least not like that.
    We're not friends.




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