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    dots Submission Name: A Friendships Warmthdots
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    Author: Jingles
    ASL Info:    19.m.canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 18/60/36
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       To a friend.That I'm falling for.Hard.
    But she has no idea.


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    dotsA Friendships Warmthdots
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    To dream a thought,
    to think a dream,
    beyond the reach of the deepest green,
    Our lives, it might sometimes seem,
    is beyond all good of golden gleam,
    When grief reaches in
    to feel our seams.
    And tear them apart,
    And hear our screams.

    Yet there comes a time when peace does creep
    Before we wake and before we sleep.
    Thats the moment you share with me.
    You change my whole reality.
    Don't cry my love.
    Don't you dare.
    The world deserves to see the smile there.
    Life is blind. Life is deaf.
    But with you in my thoughts.
    The unspoken is said.
    Time to rest my little elf.
    Place your burdens upon this shelf.
    This shelf my shoulders now replace.
    I hold them high above you're grace.
    A love now stitched.
    A friendship sewn.
    Forever in happiness.
    To you I owe.
    So rest well friend,
    I'll watch above.
    And keep in secret,
    That's it's you whom I love.




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