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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 189
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 1243



    Description:
       Nothing quite like the feeling of love.


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    There’s something in the air tonight
    Be it near or far away
    It’s something I have yet to see
    Through my cloudy skies of grey
    I ponder hard, I ponder long
    And wonder endlessly
    As I try my best to figure out
    What could this something be

    Perhaps it is the evening rain
    As it falls with gracious ease
    Or the whisper of the Northern wind
    As it sails on through the trees
    It could even be the fragrance
    Of the roses newly sprung
    Or the sweet sound of the nightingale
    When his song, it has been sung

    But yet I know it’s none of these
    As I’ve seen and heard them all
    This something, it is new to me
    As I beckon to it’s call
    It plays upon my heart and mind
    My spirit and my soul
    For the first time in my weary life
    I feel that I am whole

    With heart and mind in unison
    I look unto the night
    Then feel that something touch me so
    As it sets my heart to flight
    And now I know what’s in the air
    It’s what I’ve been dreaming of
    I feel so blessed this very night
    For that something, it is love






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      LOVE IT!!!! Love your work Frank and this is one of my favs yet....of course im adding it to my favs...i have no suggestions..it flows beautifully and is worded superbly....stormy
    | Posted on 2008-02-28 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      if ever I could critique such beautiful words; I would, but I can't ... it is strictly wonderful.
    never once have I disliked any of your works ... Never stop writing.
    | Posted on 2008-02-27 00:00:00 | by soaring eyes | [ Reply to This ]
      Love is an intangible asset but paradoxically very tangible for those blessed with its touch.It is complete and it completes you as a human being. Truly there is something wonderful in this feeling called love.The poet states that it permeates our soul, it is not superficial or for that matter surreal. It is the evening rain, the northern wind,the blooming rose in a verdant environ.Beautiful verse and lovely imagery. A truly wonderful read.
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by petrushka | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaah, love! Were it not for love, us guys would be drunken bums, bashing and beating each other for entertainment!

    This is delightful, warm, and just downright great! Makes each of us remember what we felt like when we finally met that special gal who brought cupid into our lives and transformed us into gentlemen!!

    Outstanding and delightful work from you yet again my friend in letters!!!
    | Posted on 2008-02-24 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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