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    dots Submission Name: disillusioned sicknessdots
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    Author: bas
    ASL Info:    24/f/somewhere...
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 42/48/35
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1277



    Description:
       My first lyric piece. This wasn't planned just turned out as it did. comment whatever you want


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    dotsdisillusioned sicknessdots
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    Have you
    Ever felt like you’re spinning
    (Inside out.)
    Can’t wrap around
    Can’t grasp yourself
    Just slipping through the cracks
    (of daily life)

    Just barely holding on, just crawling along...

    I try to rip through (you don’t deserve to)
    I need to catch a breath (it’s worthless)
    You see my shaking hand (ignore it)
    But You walk away you walk away, away


    Have you ever
    Felt like today is just a dream
    (Inside a dream)
    inside your head
    moments away
    from tomorrow webbed in death
    (reality illusion)

    Just barely holding on, just crawling along...alone

    But You walk away you walk away but I need you to see me, please stay

    I’m invisible to you It’s not me and you
    I know I don’t deserve to No! I know I do
    I do!

    On my knees with bloodshot eyes
    My spine’s dissolving I’m scattered somehow

    I try to rip through (you don’t deserve to)
    I need to catch a breath (it’s worthless)
    You see my shaking hand (ignore it)
    But You walk away you walk away but I
    need you to see my pain, please..... stay




    Submitted on 2008-02-24 23:36:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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