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    dots Submission Name: I Remember This Feelingdots
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    Author: ravenwolf68
    ASL Info:    40/not enough/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 690/543/62
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 879



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       Sometimes an old flame reignites and opens that door you never thought you’d get through…


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    dotsI Remember This Feelingdots
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    Your scent – recognizable from memory
    Your taste – sweeter than before
    Your spirit – not as strong as yesterday
    Your disposition – the same as always

    My shoulders – as strong as you remember
    My advice – as sound as before
    My spirit – stronger than yesterday
    My character – more charming than ever

    My soul you send soaring
    As it has always wanted
    My heart you warm
    From the cold it has endured

    Have loved you in our yesterdays
    Love you more today
    Have never known where this would go
    Just know I’ll always be here or there

    Whenever and wherever you need me

    You have awakened my sleeping mind
    Inspiring words and feelings
    Long given up as lost
    You’ve reminded me what love is

    ~Ravenwolf




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      I've always thought that if two people are meant for each other, they will end up together. Sometimes they just have to do a little growing and learning before they are ready to accept each other for all they are.

    This is lovely.
    jan
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaaah, Love! Where would we be without it?

    This is warm, sensual, and just plain enjoyable! Nice work, Lisa!
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You have such a wonderful way with words that I actually pushed my bitter negativity aside and enjoyed everything about this (which is very hard to do, by the way ).

    You described the good side of love perfectly. It's so pretty.
    I obviously can't relate, but I completely adore this anyway.

    It did make me really sad, although I know it's not supposed to. The last line is what got to me the most.


    As always,
    beautifully done.


    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]



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