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    dots Submission Name: A ghost towndots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 500
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 399



    Description:
       This is the one of my oldies poem. I was about 8th when i wrote this. young minds thoughts donno what i felt at that time to write this though


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    dotsA ghost towndots
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    There i was in a spooky place,
    i saw a person with an alien face.
    As i ran for my life he made a chase,
    t tried to get into a hiding place.
    it came behind and never left me,
    i was tired as it was a long race.
    As he caught me he turned to dust,
    a voice said you must leave you must.
    You have no time to mourn,
    get out of this ghost town.




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