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    dots Submission Name: BE FREEdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       oldies. well this case is the after effects of writing the final semester.


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    dotsBE FREEdots
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    IT IS TOUGH LIVING IN THE WORLD
    with all the worries in the mind that dwells
    we live a life which in pearled
    so precious that has no value for sell.
    Set your mind in a journey free
    where tenure is peace and green
    jump to set an arising tree
    and run to the art surrounding clean
    having no worries for some to think
    being free as to be as to be
    go for the goal not looking or you sink
    reach for the sunshine for you will see.




    Submitted on 2008-02-25 04:22:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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