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    dots Submission Name: Book wormdots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    Description:
       Oldies.
    Before exam the sickness that falls upon you.


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    dotsBook wormdots
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    I feel bore if i don't write,
    is it the habit or the way of my sight.
    A pen must be there i feel very good,
    or i get bore and so that i should.
    For exams are over and exams are coming,
    i have to do something or at least something.
    I sure like to read but new to be read,
    the same book again bore! As i said.
    Books must be there and a lot to be there,
    for sure will i get a goal to somewhere.




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